New Rap Lyrics #1. Get back at me pleasee!?
Walk into the room, lock the door behind/
We both have the same thing running through our minds/
We look at each other with a devious smile/
We start to get sweaty like we just ran a mile/
Pull the mattress on the floor so the bed doesn’t squeak/
As we both admire eachother’s physique/
It starts with a kiss from lips to tongues/
As the air starts rapidly filling our lungs/
My hand goes further down her shirt/
As the other one starts to up her skirt/
One grabs gently while a finger slides inside/
And pretty soon her mouth opens wide/
She sucks and she licks as lean on the door/
So deeper I go as she moans for more/
I take off her clothes as she’s there on her knees/
Handcuff her hands behind her and throw away the keys/
Things start to get kinky as I push her on the ground/
Put a gag in her mouth so it muffles the sound/
Now it’s my turn to pleasure as I start to go down/
And her legs start flailing all around/
The tears run down her wide open eyes/
And I ignore her muffled cries/
She can no longer take it, and she finally burst/
Didn’t know what to do, since I was her first/
And now are feelings are stirrin
I went in so deep that her speech started slurrin’/
The mumbles and moaning and pleas to keep going/
I kept going faster, the climax kept growing/
Until at last I came to my peak/
My eyes rolled back while my legs got weak/
It was finally over, the job was now done/
I untied and uncuffed her, we both had our fun/
We cleaned up the mess and cuddled all day/
"I love you" are the only words we needed to say/
These lyrics are lame
It need some Lil Wayne flavor in it
Fly Chick aka THE TRUTH | Oct 20, 2009
Is this for your girlfriend?
BlackStar | Oct 20, 2009
It’s Pretty Good, But Honestly, I Think You Should Rap About Other Topics. God Knows We Have A Billion Sex Songs Out. Lol. And Another Thing, When I Hear Rap Songs About Sex, It Has A Lot More Similes And Metaphors, Which Keeps Me More Interested.
And ANYBODY Reading My Answer, Should Check Me Out On MySpace And Read My Blog(s). I Write Rhymes, And Post Them On There And I Wanna Sorta Get The Word Out. You Wont Regret It. ;].
http://blogs.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea ction=blog.view&friendId=54109516&am p;blogId=513776505#
And You Can Also Add Me If You Would Like. =]
Robb-C | Oct 20, 2009
your lyrics are good. I can see it as clear as I can read it, the flow is tight, and there isn’t alot of big stupid words that don’t need to be there.
but…
a) if this is for a rap song, most raps are 16, 32, or 64 bars. Your lyrics are 34 bars leaving 2 extra lines.
b) The story is good, but its only about you and your girl. As a guy I don’t want to read or hear about what you 2 are doing. And I’m not sure if a girl would care either. ( If it were a rap song)
But still I think its a great peace of poety.
sandie b | Oct 20, 2009